Comments : Blank Stars

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderful poem, Shruti. I think I've said before that your work gets better and better and whenever I read your poetry, I find myself wishing you would post more.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 2 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you very much.
      I will try writing more after this exam of ours ends. :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ren

    Hi Shruti!

    Now it's my turn to read your poems and comment since you left such kind words on some of my own!

    This is an amazing write...with excellent word choice and a great flow. Your description of stars and smiles and this raw desire for love is absolutely captivating!

    I can't wait to read more of your work :)

    Well done and take care!

    • 2 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you lol.
      You don't really have to,
      but I appreciate you taking the time to read this and comment.
      Thanks!
      :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Been To this website after almost 4 Long years, & I find this !!
    "echo that is lost...so FAR..."
    "skies that reside...so HIGH"
    & you take the imagination to Transcend Boundaries..!
    Sweet, with a cofee, this made my Day !

    • 2 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you! And this comment made my day! :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    The greatest poem I ever read in my life.

  • 2 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Quite simply beautiful

    • 2 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thanks to both.