Comments : Battle of the Seasons (Sedoka)

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Meena,

    Great stuff. This is pretty much what's happening in England at the moment. Spring is on the horizon but winter still holds sway for the time being.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 9 months ago

    by yogi73

    I love how you have personified the seasons in an eternal battle. A right smart poem

  • 8 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!!!

    Meena, it feels like ages since i've read your work and it's nice to see that it is still awesome as ever!

    This is freakin awesome.

    Ben

  • 8 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Beautiful writing.

    Craig

    But she cannot hold back the spring
    With one final fury, she coats the world in white overnight.
    By morning she is gone, spring has won
    She can never stop his ascending.

    Funny how despite jack frost I always think of winter as female. Go figure lol

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, this is amazing! Darn it, I am out of votes too...Bah! You have put spring into perfect perspectives. Lovely!

  • 8 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Beautifully penned. I wish spring always. But without losing there is no victory.