Comments : Battle of the Seasons (Sedoka)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard


    Great stuff. This is pretty much what's happening in England at the moment. Spring is on the horizon but winter still holds sway for the time being.

    All the very best,


  • 1 year ago

    by yogi73

    I love how you have personified the seasons in an eternal battle. A right smart poem

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse


    Meena, it feels like ages since i've read your work and it's nice to see that it is still awesome as ever!

    This is freakin awesome.


  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Beautiful writing.


    But she cannot hold back the spring
    With one final fury, she coats the world in white overnight.
    By morning she is gone, spring has won
    She can never stop his ascending.

    Funny how despite jack frost I always think of winter as female. Go figure lol

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, this is amazing! Darn it, I am out of votes too...Bah! You have put spring into perfect perspectives. Lovely!

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    Beautifully penned. I wish spring always. But without losing there is no victory.