Comments : Beautiful Lie

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sad, emotive, powerful - all adjectives that could be used to describe this poem, Maple. Above all, though, it RHYMES! And what a wonderful job you do of it.

    Take care .

    • 7 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Gigggggles, thank you Ben!!! I knew you would be shocked to see a rhyme from me!

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Now it's stuff like this that makes me wish I could nominate others

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    Chills with those last lines.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, this is amazing! I was awed and sadden all at the same time. I don't have enough words to describe how I feel about this write. So well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you Poetess and Brenda!

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    You're a god damned freak.......Awesomeness.

    • 7 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Lmaoooooooooo squeaks, that truly is the best comment ever! Whooooot

  • 7 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    This was a wonderful but sad piece, full of emotion and good imagery which I enjoyed reading very much. And it rhymed!! lol! Nice work Maple Tree!

    • 7 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Gigggggles, aww Peter thank you!!