Comments : Hopeless

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    ‘I can’t drown my demons they know how to swim’

    ^^

    This is a sad poem but this line is excellent.

    Well done, welcome to the site and all the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    You may not be able to drown your demons,

    but as they surface a short sharp kick to the nose is gonna bloody slow em down some.

    Respect

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    This is sad yet beautifully written! Like Craig said, we may not be able to drown our demons, but we can slow them down/smack them away- remember your demons do not have to define who you are.
    An amazing write through and through!