Comments : Para-Poetic

  • 2 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Gotta admit I was lured in completely with this one, and so much of it rings true.

    It's those dark hours, when all is quiet and the mentality of the day faded, That's when the mind begins to tumble.

    Thoughts twist and turn becoming words and in this case becoming something wonderful.


  • 2 years ago

    by Ren

    Andrea this is a beautiful, well flowing piece of poetry full of gorgeous, chilling imagery. A truly wonderful write that, like Craig said, lured me in completely after just reading the first line! Love this! Excellent job :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael


    Wow, absolutely brilliant write... blow me down!

    Michael :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Phil


  • 2 years ago

    by Poetess

    I never know what to comment on your work. Please make a book and publish it!? Lol

    • 2 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Ha! Gigggggles...Thank you!
      I've been told that before! Lovely compliment, thank you

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, this is amazing! Love, love, love it. The whole concept behind haunting the one who has caused this pain, I have a few of those I would like to do that to. Fabulous!

  • 2 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Mixing incantation with poetry, only Andrea could do. Come to think of it, there are so much similarities between these two, specially in the mind of a talent like you.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I do hope this wins this week. It deserves to, but either way, it's a wonderful work.

    All the best as ever, Andrea.