Comments : The Count up (slam poem)

  • 11 months ago

    by Hellon

    I'm so glad I saw this in time to nominate before the votes are frozen for the weekend. Yaks! This is are amazing but...I've always thought so :)

  • 11 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I found this completely captivating.



  • 11 months ago

    by Ren

    Oh my...this is amazing and full of so much emotion!!! Your strength and raw honesty is very admirable! I'm in tears!! Fantastic job!!

  • 8 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    The story to this poem was not only captivating, but also so perfectly penned that I can imagine this person growing, living, and even ultimately thriving after moving on from their troubles. There were great images highlighting different moments of each year, each one even more powerful than the last. The title was a great fit for the way it was expressed and I can't even begin to imagine how wonderfully this would be expressed when read aloud, but it is most definitely a fantastic slam piece.