Comments : A friendly Warning

  • 7 months ago

    by BlueJay

    The word choice in this is very interesting and the flow is a little choppy, but it still managed to give the piece personality, so that was neat. Cool piece to read through.

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a very good rhyming piece of poetry which I love. Also, there's some very healthy advice throughout.

    Well done and all the best,