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by Ben Pickard
I bet it all on love and lost on a straight flush
And the Only thing left was my heart crushed...
I love the power in these last two lines and the write as a whole is sad, but honestly told and well written.
by Fredy Sanchez
Thank you! I appreciate the time you put reading my work!
Nice piece of writing Fredy
Powerful and emotional
all the best
Thank you! I appreciate that!
Like Michael said, this is a very powerful and emotional write, with flawless rhyming and a smooth flow. Well done!!
Great use of license with "again" and "pretend," I wouldn't have thought of that.