Comments : Here we go

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I bet it all on love and lost on a straight flush
    And the Only thing left was my heart crushed...

    ^^

    I love the power in these last two lines and the write as a whole is sad, but honestly told and well written.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Fredy Sanchez

      Thank you! I appreciate the time you put reading my work!

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Nice piece of writing Fredy

    Powerful and emotional

    all the best

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Like Michael said, this is a very powerful and emotional write, with flawless rhyming and a smooth flow. Well done!!

  • 8 months ago

    by Tony

    Great use of license with "again" and "pretend," I wouldn't have thought of that.