Comments : There are Rats in our Ceiling

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Sweet piece of writing mossgirl :)


  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    You are a braver soul than I. Creatively penned. I liked it a lot.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    My worst nightmare!!!

  • 1 year ago


    Well, well, you also write poems about real life. We here in Florida have numerous creations to be watchful of but the lowly rat gets a big shove! They loved our attic, we also heard them squeaking happily in the walls. Sad but we had to give them something nasty to eat, no more noise as they went to their eternal sleep!
    Great Poem!

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      I think that preparing a hearty meal will solve the whole thing. Thanks for the comment Ken.