Comments : There are Rats in our Ceiling

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Sweet piece of writing mossgirl :)

    Michael

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    You are a braver soul than I. Creatively penned. I liked it a lot.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    My worst nightmare!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Well, well, you also write poems about real life. We here in Florida have numerous creations to be watchful of but the lowly rat gets a big shove! They loved our attic, we also heard them squeaking happily in the walls. Sad but we had to give them something nasty to eat, no more noise as they went to their eternal sleep!
    Great Poem!

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I think that preparing a hearty meal will solve the whole thing. Thanks for the comment Ken.