In a darkened room glow patchwork stars upon a ceiling short of paint,
whilst one by one, they lose their glow - their voices, oh so faint.
Said one to the other, "share my light, lest The Dark call you her home.
Come now, come, and don't be shy, we two are now alone".
So light was shared, yet darkness dared to close in ever more.
Thus is the similitude to our never-ending wars.
A short but compelling poem rich in depth. There were so many good poems this week but this one spoke to me the most. Creative use of imagery and language with an unexpected powerful ending. The light is indeed fading as we are all caught up in these never ending conflicts.
Damn I just used my last vote... I would have nominated this in a heart beat! I really hope someone does! This is an amazing write and beautifully written! Amazing job...and definitely in need of a |love button|
Lol thank you. It's ok I don't care much for nominations, as long as you enjoyed it :)
9 months ago
Dang !!! This needs a nomination and Fast ! For some reason it made me think of 2 lovers 1 in the physical world and the other in the spirit world ... Just wow! Especially as I have just been watching a spirit medium yes I know not to everyone's liking but he was fantastic!!!! Lovely to see you name again!!