Comments : Adieu.

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    WOW. I am speechless with this

  • 4 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    A heart rendering poem which has endured much pain and is
    still tagging along with it, perhaps unable to put it to rest or maybe thinking
    let it be an acknowledgement to those who found it a burden...maybe I'm wrong
    but this is such a painful write...take care

    Welcome to the site :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    A warm welcome! This is really a raw honest write, thank you for sharing, loved it. I look forward to reading more from you.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Welcome to the site, and what a grand entrance, I must say! WOW is the right word. This is a breathtaking, stunning, heart-melting piece. Excellent!

  • 4 months ago

    by gopi nath

    simple and best

  • 2 months ago

    by Milo

    The whole it burns through me. Great line to end the poem. Tangled in love, regardless if he or she loves you back, is a powerful write and I like it.

    • 2 months ago

      by Sai

      Thank you! And to everyone else who left such kind words.