The collaboration of styles is very similar throughout most of this tantalizing flight. The initial theme has a gentle waft which painted me a soft butterfly type Hummingbird only to be clipped mid poem with a harsher tone of a bird, stripped of feathers? An interesting read well done guys!
Intoxicated in flutter while dancing with the winds made
me think of someone happily dancing intoxicated maybe even
with wine glass in hand.
Second stanza - carried this through but gave a romantic
slant. I like to think that someone engrossed on the
setting sun has romance in thier heart.
Third stanza - Candles fading in her presence links in well
giving the impression of glowing happiness more brighter than
candles. Blowing them out implies a required intimacy
Fourth stanza - I can still imagine our heroine dancing around
in the moon light
Fifth stanza - Perhaps her heroine is journeying to see her
loved one as she finds smiles in the stars and the soft touch
of the nights winds
Next three stanzas shows her struggle against the winds and
it becomes apparent that her struggle to stay upbeat and intact
is not just during her nights journey but pertenant to her
every day life.
The last stanza - heading towards unknown possibilities only
knowing that I am called to fly is a superb finale
all in all a wonderful portrayal of a strong happy
spirit happily heading out on a journey that will challenge her in more
ways than she knows.