This is such a heartbreaking yet beautifully written piece! The format is excellent, and the story told is one that hits very close to home. Well done, and much love and peace to you!
8 months ago
by Ben Pickard
A really moving piece. This is that friends/lovers conundrum that people seem to suffer the effects of all too often. Should we cross the line/shouldn't we? and if we do, can it ever be the same again? In my experience, it's something we pretend we can get on with but, as your poem suggests, the reality is rarely so simple.
I love this!...I could feel every word for myself. It is so hard to set the boundaries after you have been with someone for so long to just say "we're only friends now". But somethings will never change. Beautifully written!
Thank you so much! The thing with this piece is it was about someone in particular but after some distance I realized it wasnt about him and who he is, I didnt miss Him with his Name. I just missed him with his physical presence. Which makes this a sad poem in a different way haha but thank you for the read and feedback.