Comments : The Samuri's Sword - a Mother's tale

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Angela,

    Such a lovely rhyming piece, and the Samurai sword a wonderful metaphor
    really enjoyed reading your poem
    well done I say :)

    Michael x

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Ms. Angie, I must agree with Michael. This is great.

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    All I'm going to say is we my outgrow our mothers laps but definitely not their hearts.

    Em

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    All I will say is that I understand this poem entirely.

  • 3 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Thank you everyone for your kind comments - I wanted to edit 'sun' in the first line for 'moon' - can't seem to find out how to!

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written piece. I think that moon works just as well as sun because the fourth line ends with 'soon' so works either with sun or moon. x