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What's more powerful than free will? The unconscious. This is a vivid imagination of what I would like to fall asleep to in the dark as I transition to the dream world. Great descriptive write. Witness fireflies before my dreamlike eyes...
Chandi, this is very beautiful! Made me feel like I'm inside a dream. Simply breathtaking. This is excellent and it's my pleasure to nominate this.
to feel at peace as you fall asleep is just one thing I reckon we all want but never completely get. Great work
Thankyou so much everyone for your amazing feedbacks
thanks for reading, i truly appreciate :)
by Ben Pickard
Some truly wonderful descriptive writing in this poem. Beautifully written.
All the very best
This is just lovely. Your visuals just flow beautifully. Well done-
Thanks Brenda and Ben
glad you liked it:)
LOVE this! Well done!!!
thankyou Ren :)
by Holly Donwell
Your way of expressing words is just truly amazing. :)
Yey! Congrats, Chandi! Great job!
omg! i can't believe this. All thanks to you , for the nomination :)
Congratulations on your win chandelier :)
thankyou Michael :)
Could have sworn I had commented on this but obviously not... This is fantastically done and congratulations on your win
Thanks Em :-)
Congratulations on your front page win!
Thankyou Brenda :)
Congrats on the win!! :)
Thanks Ren ^_^
Fantastically done. you just wowed me
Thank you so much dear friend!
I'm glad you could finally join the site xx
I keep rereading this poem. I don't oversell my praises or get caught up with a particular poem often, but I'm still delighted and mesmerized by this write.
I keep rereading this poem. I don't oversell my praises or get caught up with a particular poem often, but I'm still delighted and mesmerized by this write. It's been a long time this has happened
omg that's such a big compliment in itself
thankyou so much, Milo
by CJ Maleney
"When everyone's asleep" By chandelier 7 points
I badly wanted to hit the favorite button on this unfortunately I must refrain .
Being a judge on here it not easy, there are so many precious things that capture ones heart and mind. So I'll avoid that button for now and revisit it at a later date.
The thing about sleep is "we need it: we can't survive without it and yet many many members of the community have very little.
It's not healthy, but sometimes it is a catalyst for works of genius and art.
This poem I consider to be one of such.
Well done (7)