Comments : when everyone's asleep

  • 4 months ago

    by Milo

    What's more powerful than free will? The unconscious. This is a vivid imagination of what I would like to fall asleep to in the dark as I transition to the dream world. Great descriptive write. Witness fireflies before my dreamlike eyes...

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Chandi, this is very beautiful! Made me feel like I'm inside a dream. Simply breathtaking. This is excellent and it's my pleasure to nominate this.

  • 4 months ago

    by Phil

    to feel at peace as you fall asleep is just one thing I reckon we all want but never completely get. Great work

  • 4 months ago

    by chandelier

    Thankyou so much everyone for your amazing feedbacks
    thanks for reading, i truly appreciate :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some truly wonderful descriptive writing in this poem. Beautifully written.

    All the very best

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely. Your visuals just flow beautifully. Well done-

  • 4 months ago

    by chandelier

    Thanks Brenda and Ben
    glad you liked it:)

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    LOVE this! Well done!!!

  • 4 months ago

    by Holly Donwell

    Your way of expressing words is just truly amazing. :)

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yey! Congrats, Chandi! Great job!

    • 4 months ago

      by chandelier

      omg! i can't believe this. All thanks to you , for the nomination :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations on your win chandelier :)

    Michael

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Could have sworn I had commented on this but obviously not... This is fantastically done and congratulations on your win

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page win!

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win!! :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Brooke

    Fantastically done. you just wowed me

    • 4 months ago

      by chandelier

      Thank you so much dear friend!
      I'm glad you could finally join the site xx

  • 3 months ago

    by Milo

    I keep rereading this poem. I don't oversell my praises or get caught up with a particular poem often, but I'm still delighted and mesmerized by this write.

  • 3 months ago

    by Milo

    I keep rereading this poem. I don't oversell my praises or get caught up with a particular poem often, but I'm still delighted and mesmerized by this write. It's been a long time this has happened

    • 3 months ago

      by chandelier

      omg that's such a big compliment in itself
      thankyou so much, Milo
      xx

  • 3 weeks ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    "When everyone's asleep" By chandelier 7 points

    I badly wanted to hit the favorite button on this unfortunately I must refrain .

    Being a judge on here it not easy, there are so many precious things that capture ones heart and mind. So I'll avoid that button for now and revisit it at a later date.

    The thing about sleep is "we need it: we can't survive without it and yet many many members of the community have very little.

    It's not healthy, but sometimes it is a catalyst for works of genius and art.

    This poem I consider to be one of such.

    Well done (7)