Comments : Should be asleep

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I don't know if you've seen it, Naomi, but have a glance at the thread Michael has set up on the main boards; you may benefit.
    Take care and pm me if you need an ear,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you Benny. I actually did see it - I just dont think Im ready. At this stage im happy to pour it into poetry, but sharing openly like that..

      Yes im weird..
      .but thank you! And same if you ever need a chat..

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Take it slowly, Nams, it is never easy...but you can always count on your PnQ friends...:-) Your poems tell us that you are doing great.

    • 8 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Naomi, I understand entirely. Apart from my poetry, I personally am uncomfortable about expressing my thoughts any other way.

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      thank you both :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey Miss Nams,

    Such a deep and personal piece of writing. Expressed with sheer guts and bravery, so really well done to produce your story told.

    So resonate with much that you write, and my goodness that's a natural way of communicating through expression. Sleep is important, but not always that easy.

    Much much love and warmth

    Michael :) x

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I dig this and I'm with you as best I can be being so far away. You're strong.

    Love you xx

  • 8 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Amazing, captivating, expressive write! Your rhyming is quite unique and flows very well. Such a heart-felt piece. Your mistakes are never who you are. It's what you do when you pick up the pieces that defines you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Every passing minute is another chance to turn it all around.

    So begin it and please don't forget us to mention there in your new chapter.