Comments : A chance

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ahhh, love. It's a beautiful feeling! This is so sweet! The rhymes are very natural...just flowing with love. A great write.

    • 3 months ago

      by Ren

      Agreed!!! <3

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    This is really sweet.. love can be like water so beautiful yet so destructive don't you think?

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful young love. Excellent rhyming and lovely theme. Loved it Milly x

  • 3 months ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Beautiful!