Comments : The Lung Chronicles

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maple, my thoughts are genuinely with you.
    Take care, good woman and speak soon,
    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Be still my heart... This gave me goosebumps

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A haunting write with a hidden weight of sadness behind
    each verse...beautifully sad...take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Kireasha L

    A sad truth....I prepared to dance with you. beautifully written.