Comments : Shotgun

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Whoa, amazing simply amazing

    Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I have to agree with Craig - this is amazingly done

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Amazing and just wonderfully crafted!

  • 6 years ago

    by Sai

    This sounds like it could be a song. Very rhythmic/melodic, whichever is the right term. It captures the fragility of life. The part about the dead "keeps walking/talking" struck me the most. Might be due to the sh I'm going through right now, that aside I enjoyed reading this.