Comments : Oh Air . . . [ Acrostic ]

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    Wow...Epic and beautiful - as rhyming poems can be. Just wow.

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi, Lucero. Wow, I am blown away... This is indeed epic. What a wonderful feeling I had when I read this... Like I too am freed from my own suffocation.

    Great rhyming and flow... I love the creative and clever end...

    Beautiful, calming write. Loved it.

    • 1 month ago

      by Everlasting

      Aww thank you, guys. I'm glad you liked the rhyming on this one too.

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Really like this E.L

    An acrostic piece of art

    Michael :)

    • 1 month ago

      by Everlasting

      Thanks Michael, I'm glad you like the acrostic.

  • 1 month ago

    by hiraeth

    I had to do a double take to make sure that this was an acrostic poem, and upon doing so, I also realized it was a rhyming poem. I feel like there might be meter in here, but hadn't thoroughly checked. Reading every verse aloud, it flowed off the tongue. That being said, you did an amazing job with your usage of imagery, super vivid poem, and extremely creative as well! :)

    • 1 month ago

      by Everlasting

      Yup, there's some meter in there. Specially, in the first half of the poem. Thank you for reading.