Very beautiful!
Stephanie

Terrific! I am in so love with your poetry.

-Mini

Nicely rhymed...and very very sweet!

This is beautiful and well rhymed. Well done

Nicely rhymed romantic piece written with a positive slant. Its lively to see more positive poetry coming through as there has been a strong lean towards dark and dismal recently. A piece that I think we can all relate to because you often have to kiss a few frogs before you find real love. An excellent piece. Milly x

Sorry I missed this littls gem... It's fluent and in its simplicity it's just extremely beautiful. The repetition really sets it off too

It's hard to find true love.
Beautiful poem