Judging Comment: This poem shook me right down to my core. The title grabbed my attention and my heart and my teeth sunk into the grit and emotion of this poem. This is obviously a very near and dear piece of poetry and if it's reality I am so incredibly sorry. My heart aches reading this poem, knowing the depth that this pain can create. Well done conveying just a sliver of the emotion stuck into your back. <3
I couldn't breathe while reading this poem. Each line painted a story in my mind. Beautifully written
4 months ago
Grave of a Stillborn Soul by Mihir Deshmukh points 10
Mihir captivated me with this piece and only on the third read did I realise that this was in fact a rhyming piece because of how well it was done and how smooth it was to read. Usually I find a 'favourite' part which captures me more than any other part to a piece but with this one I didn't because it was just fantastically haunting and the imagery was just wow alongside the rhyming when I actually realised it was a rhyming piece.