Comments : Severed Ties

  • 10 months ago

    by Mini

    Beautifully penned :)


  • 10 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You capture beautifully the pain and confusion caused when close friends betray your trust. I think its something that happens a lot when you are teenagers. Allegiences change for all manner of reasons. I certainly remember feeling disallusioned with friends at that time. I found my true long term friends didnt come along until a lot later and those I have been friends with for getting on twenty five years now. Well done on a great piece. Milly x

    • 10 months ago

      by RustySoul

      Thank you Milly. I've been through this in my younger years. Appreciate your comments.

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    Fantastic work

  • 10 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Loved this Rusty. I know the feeling well. Beautifully penned and as always wonderful rhyming.