Comments : Mountains Turn To Dust

  • 1 month ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I really liked the story and the rhyming in this. It flows really well and is gorgeous.

    I hate criticising stuff but you broke your format a little way through and it caused it to wobble slightly for me.

    Nether the less, it's still bloody fantastic.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 1 month ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thank You AR Criticism welcomed