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by CJ Maleney
I really liked the story and the rhyming in this. It flows really well and is gorgeous.
I hate criticising stuff but you broke your format a little way through and it caused it to wobble slightly for me.
Nether the less, it's still bloody fantastic.
by Paul Hirst
Thank You AR Criticism welcomed