Comments : A Lullaby

  • 2 months ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Congrats on your win!:)

  • 1 month ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "A Lullaby" By Mark (10 points)

    This is quite possibly one of the sweetest things I have read in recent times.

    There have been many tails of heartache and woe, many of love, so many of loss.
    Tales of turbulent pasts and the uncertainty of futures.

    This poem by Mark takes us on a different journey. The love of a parent for a child. The hope and the desire for them to be happy, to be everything they dream of. To achieve and enjoy while doing so.

    The pride and love of a parent!

    I hope and I know you are proud of your little one even though, I think they are perhaps not so little anymore.

    Still I and every other soul reading this will want to slide down a rainbow.

    It just!

    Beautiful (10)

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    A Lullaby by Mark points 10
    Mark has a beautiful way of writing and out of his pieces that were nominated thins week this one stood out to me for its beautiful serene feel to it which in my eyes felt nostalgic, raw, honest and and pretty personal possibly for a love or just genuinely for us all because we all need some upliftment some times. Well done on another beautiful piece