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by Ben Pickard
This is very good. The rhymes and clever half rhymes have not suffocated the rich imagery in any way which isn't always easy to achieve. Well done.
All the very best,
by Sherry Caayupan
Thank you, ben! I loved writing this one! :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
Beautiful imagery Sherry ... a lovely read :-)
Thanx, Kitty! Hope you enjoyed reading this! :)
by Free verse
Full of wonders. I loved 3rd stanza the most
Thanx! It was inspirational... :)
by Milly Hayward
A well deserved nomination with beautiful visuals and agree with Ben the rhymes and half rhymes work brilliantly. Milly x
Thanx! I really appreciate it! ;)