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by Milly Hayward
This piece leads the reader through the depth of feeling of a great love with perfectly captured emotion to the final reveal that it is unrequited. An enjoyable read. Milly x
by Ben Pickard
Yes, a very good read with some great use of metaphor throughout.
All the best
Nicely written, the story flows beautifully of a love that is perfect for you but alas can never be. Well done -
by Kitty Cat Lady
Erin, you've described the process of falling for someone so beautifully but now I'm sad that it's unrequited. Fantastic! x
by Free verse
It is unrequited most of the times.
Sad yet beautiful
Your poem is among my favorites.
by Erin Cruise