Comments : A prince not my own

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This piece leads the reader through the depth of feeling of a great love with perfectly captured emotion to the final reveal that it is unrequited. An enjoyable read. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, a very good read with some great use of metaphor throughout.

    All the best

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely written, the story flows beautifully of a love that is perfect for you but alas can never be. Well done -

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Erin, you've described the process of falling for someone so beautifully but now I'm sad that it's unrequited. Fantastic! x
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    It is unrequited most of the times.
    Sad yet beautiful
    Your poem is among my favorites.