Comments : Victim of a Gun

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    S - ive been thinking of you lately and everything thats been going on..I have missed your poetry.

    This piece is dark and i felt the loss.. :( i do hope you are well and thank you for posting. I imagine how hard it was.

    Miss and love you S...

    Dont be a stranger to us xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen! How wonderful to see one of your poems! I have missed your words-this write is no exception, a telling tale of todays society. Hugs my friend-

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello Stephen. First of all, I'm happy to read a new post from you. I feel the sad reality in this poem. You have a great way with rhyme and this flowed out really well. I really love the last stanza, it has a certain weight that made me really sad thinking this is what's happening now. Great write as always.

  • 6 years ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    Love the rhyming and the theme of this poem in general. Great read!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Fan bloody tastic!!!!