Comments : I have you

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad poem, lined with real hope though. True love can literally turn our lives around.
    Your poems are always detailed and honest and for that I applaud you.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thanks Ben.
      You’ve always been one of the few to keep up with my writing and give me feedback and I appreciate it more than you know.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A pleasure.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sometimes we really can't escape that feeling of being scared of losing our other half even though we are assured of their love. Reading this reminded me that love really is a beautiful thing because it drowns out all our fears. Beautifully written, BT.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A sad piece that describes well the self harming and of the inner turmoil but ends nicely with the hope that comes from love. I like the recognition that love shines through in the end. Milly x