I read this on the thread and was going to comment when it had finished.
This is a very interesting piece, with your perception of God. How you have written this is a deep thought provoking poem, which I enjoyed reading.
One small query is:
' some whisper I am a ring' I just wondered why it was not written without mentioning 'am a ring'
so ' some whisper I...
whereas 'GOD' and 'LOVE you did this, and this is purely out of my interest. But anyway a great write my friend :)