Comments : Sleep

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Risqué,

    This had me intrigued all the way through, in terms of a loss beckoning which I am sorry to hear and thank you for sharing.
    A delicate and wonderful flow, with your emotions yearning with pain and frustrations.

    'what a beautiful disaster, for when I wake you are gone' such a sad line. A really well written piece, and happy to nominate this :)
    Much love and warmth
    Michael :)x

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you Michael, always a pleasure to receive your reviews and remarks.
      R. x

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    what a beautiful feeling and such beautifully expressed. It is the love so pure that looking, struggling, burning, to go beyond time and space, not to hurt as much, to find out separation is an illusion either temporally or spatially.

    Love your works

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Your comment embodied what I was wholeheartedly trying to express. Thank you.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful portrayal of love. Such lovely imagery that will touch the heart and soul of anyone who's been in love. Milly x

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I've fallen in love I swore I wouldn't but I have lol just wow

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Curious why you swore you wouldn't ;)
      but thank you.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Really liked this a lot. I too mourn the time I spend away from my husband. You have really did an awesome write with this-

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you.
      There really never is enough time.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "Even as I sleep I breathe you in... I breathe the day out."

    This is beautiful ... this line especially! Love it, well done :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 1 year ago

      by Risqué

      Glad you enjoyed it!

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Risque, another beautiful, captivating write from you.

  • 1 year ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Bitter Sweet lovely write