Comments : The Lone Tribesman

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A meloncoly piece about loneliness and wanting to be part of a family. The lone wolf not wanting to be lonely any more. I think this will touch a note with anyone who's ever been lonely. An emotional piece. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by BlueJay

    So there is a lot to this that I could say and should say, because umm hello, our reasons! But for now as far as the comment alone is concerned, I like the flow to this and how easily everything rolls together and off the tongue. I enjoyed your word choice and the devices you chose to tell this story with, like the repetition of the tribe and lonely comments - yet it wasn't direct repetition because you found new ways to describe it each time (wonderful). I think your stanza breaks were artfully done and your style was crafted just so for you and your readers to be emotionally filled. Nice write. Call me, we'll talk about the rest.

  • 1 year ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Heartfelt and a touching piece.