Comments : Probable Cause

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    EXCELLNT! Your humorous poetry really is top-notch, Milly; it has a wicked bite to it. The end of this had me in stitches.
    I will nominate this later when my votes are recharged.

    Ben

    • 9 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you so much Ben I'm so glad you found it funny. Humour is such a hard thing to gauge. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 9 months ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Thanks Milly, I enjoyed this piece. Very contemporary and relevant.

    -IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 9 months ago

    by Mark

    What a marvelous rhyme and quick flow. The humor is outstanding!

  • 9 months ago

    by Jamie

    The story you have crafted is amazing Milly. The imagery stands out most to me because each stanza paints a wonderful picture. The humor is not without notice either. Also the rhyming is perfect. Added to my favorites as well.

  • 9 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh Milly this is hilarious! I'm really laughing here! :-) everything about it is brilliant! I just love your humour :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly

    You have a wonderful knack with witty and rhyme, (with a cheeky undertone :))
    A lovely clever poem, and a the end just wrapped this up...brilliant, and I'm pleased this is nominated
    Much love
    Michael x

  • 9 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Dear Milly what a great piece and agree with Michael glad it was nominated.

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Milly, what a wonderful write! Very clever wordage, entertaining all the way through-well done-

  • 8 months ago

    by Em

    Definitely nailed it Milly with your honesty and wit

  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hahaha...oh my, Milly! Yay this was clever and fun...and I loved this to pieces.

  • 8 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    Yes, i did enjoy this. Fun to read, humorous & i liked the repetitive rhyme. Greatness (:

  • 8 months ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Very glad you got an HM Milly, congratulations and again, I enjoyed this thoroughly!

    IdTakeABulletForYou