What a marvelous rhyme and quick flow. The humor is outstanding!
3 months ago
The story you have crafted is amazing Milly. The imagery stands out most to me because each stanza paints a wonderful picture. The humor is not without notice either. Also the rhyming is perfect. Added to my favorites as well.
You have a wonderful knack with witty and rhyme, (with a cheeky undertone :))
A lovely clever poem, and a the end just wrapped this up...brilliant, and I'm pleased this is nominated