Comments : Extra sensory perception

  • 1 month ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael - can i have whatever your taking or drinking! These poems you have been writing are amazing..
    We all need to be rid of the liers and cheats from our lives!

    I love the layout and rhyming in this.. Well done

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thanks nams
      Only a wee single malt ;)x
      And we do for sure

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wonderful write! I think it would be wonderful to be able to "sniff" the bad ones out. I love your rhyming through-out. Well done-

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)
      Sniff em out x

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love the title, the content, the rhyming, the layout, the humour, AND the message! Just brilliant Michael! Clever and funny :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K
      Lovely comments x :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    Fantastic piece Michael if only we could smell the lies and the heartaches people put us through before they do

    All the best
    Em

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em
      Be a help for sure :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    Michael! Wouldn't it be good to have such perception. Their is a lighter side to this rhyme yet the message is you may have been hurt by someone deceptive. Always a fan of your writes

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark and spot on fella :)

  • 1 month ago

    by S s...

    Flows like a river.
    Another wonderful write and I completely agree with Naomi, can we have whatever your taking or drinking!

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Haha thanks FR
      It would be scary how much your worth would be! :)

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so wonderfully rhymed Michael. Love the message too.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Black hole

    Michael, I always find it hard to write in aabb rhyme scheme.
    You did it so well.
    Almost in every stanza you used a synonym of unpleasant which clearly shows how much this person has upset you.
    I wish we all could do that, smell people lies, but just like you we all are afraid or tired of sniffing it again and again that unpleasant smell of lies.
    If We could detect the difference between the truth and lies, good and bad, light and darkness, God and devil, we could have saved our heart from all the suffering deceit brings.
    For once we can swallow the truth no matter how bitter it tastes or breathe in it even if it suffocates us.
    But the unpleasant smell of lies is always too hard to endure.
    To be honest, it is a poem speaks for the simple things happen in our lives.
    All of us get deceive by others in one way or another somewhere in our life.
    But what made this poem extraordinary is your choice of words.
    Your wisdom.
    Though it's a poem about lies, but you wrote the truth.
    And there could be no end to the interpretation of this poem.
    But that's all from me.
    Forgive me, if I have gone beyond any limits.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Black hole and for reading my poem :)
      Yes all what you say I agree with.
      My late dog who was a wonderful rescue Lurcher. My inspiration came from a thought of him, and how he could sense my moods with me and the incredible sense of smell, and I wondered if he could smell deceit, however unable to speak but would bark at certain people he had never met. I always wondered what he knew, that I couldn't possibly :)