Comments : Absolution

  • 4 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Shane...a beautiful, heart-breaking write. Ahhh...you are so good with words!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    So much depth and feeling in this beautiful and heart-breaking write, Shane.

    All the very best as ever,

    Ben

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Em

    Be
    Still
    My
    Heart

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Shane, nominated that's all I got. So heartfelt...

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    Completely heart breaking, yet so beautifully described.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "As I cut your soul into half
    with sharp edges of my words."

    Genius line Shane and great poem! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 3 weeks ago

    by S s...

    Thanks everyone

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Woah free verse.
    This is probably one of the most amazing poems I’ve ever read on this website.
    Your honesty is so real and raw and I can’t even begin to wrap my head around what the frick I just read.
    I’m a little speechless.
    I hope to god that this wins

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    From this poem the meaning of forgiveness is understood in depth
    and with much heartache. The way this poem unfolds and carries
    the reader through with the writer, making every emotion felt
    is so sad yet powerfully worded with simple words. A painful
    episode waiting to be released by forgiveness.(10 points)