I was there as I read this, Mark, so rich and vivid is your description and resultant imagery. Fantastic.

All the best,

Ben

Mark, what a wonderful write! A battle of long ago still with whispers and remnants lingering in the fog and cold. Visually on point. 2 typos possibly? The second stanza, should hums be hymns? Also hinded, be hidden? If not, my apologies.

Wow. Such a vivid tale and a wonderful tone. Superb write here.

Marky Mark - what a wonderful piece. You have only been with this site for a short while, but i am alreasy seeing great improvement in your pieces.. they are slowly becoming more fine tuned and the flow is excellent. Paired with a fantastic story, and well you get this piece.

glad its nominated!

Wow!
Mark,
This is simply a truly amazing piece. The story about the river Somme and the battles of ghosts, songs that are sung of heroes. Beautiful words and expression throughout.
Pleased this is nominated, and well done
Michael :)