Comments : Caught.. Red-handed

  • 5 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Hahaha! Oh dear Michael ... it's a slippery road from there!
    Belly laughs here! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      It certainly I Miss Kitty K haha x

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    This brought a smile to my face because of the innocence you spoke of and how you spoke of it then I got a real kick in the gut with the realisation (with the last lines) that this was far better than what you'd had to do in reality and I was overcome with sadness and felt a little bitter that you like many of us have had to suffer at other peoples hands.

    Hopefully that makes sense.
    Take care
    Em x

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em
      and yes it makes sense and thank you for your nomination :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Sure made me Lough and glad to see it was nominated. All the very best

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar x

  • 5 months ago

    by Mark

    Laughing here Michael, very well written.

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      haha thanks Mark :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Michael what a fun write! Had me going for a moment. Well done-

  • 5 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    OHHHH Michael - many giggles here!!!!
    You also had me going for a moment!!

    haha Well done..

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks nams,
      well going for a moment is good enough haha x :)

    • 5 months ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      going for a moment - haha my mind is well int he gutter this morning!!!

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mr. M this made me giggle too...haha.
    Nicely told. :-)

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Risqué

    too cute!

  • 1 month ago

    by Purvi Gadia

    Judging comment:

    Oh, what a beautiful write, with a amusing twist to the story in the end. From when the lady in question was introduced, her charm was exquisite. You described her flawlessly. And when it was revealed to us (the readers) that this alluring lady was a mannequin -
    her sophistication, her poise were of an immovable object - it was remarkably amusing. Very well penned.