Comments : Sorry Man

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A work of beauty, intertwining metaphors that are powerful to say the least.

    I enjoy your writing!
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing. All the best to you

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Surreal at its best. Reminds me of Salvador Dali's paintings. I think conciseness gives a chance to a creative mind to be absolutely flawless, like this, in a poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is extremely powerful

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my...cleverly done. Cute and striking little piece.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done-I love the way you wove this together.

  • 8 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Short but very descriptive
    Nice poem

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you for reading guys. It’s much appreciated.

  • 8 years ago

    by Walter

    I really like this powerful piece
    Well done