Comments : Symphony of birth

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful little piece, Michael. Perfect.

    All the best to you as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben :)

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yes this is perfect. Nothing like that feeling when you hear your baby cry for the first time. Sweet and touching, Michael.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by Mark

    Oh Michael, wonderful poetry dedicated to family. The way you phrase this..makes me want to start a family.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark-lovely comments :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is beautiful my friend

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Andrea :)
      That means so much x

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, just lovely. It's an awe worthy sweet write.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw, just beautiful Michael, really. :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Ah, thank you Miss Kitty :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by ddavidd

    This so close to how I feel dear Michel.
    Wonderful!!

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Frank :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    As always wonderful work

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by naaz

    Though natural recital has already composed, yet there are years for me to hear the orchestra.
    Michael, I have no words for the beauty of this poem. Every word written by you in this poem is itself a miracle.
    I have seen my parents, but never understand how it feels to be one.
    Thanks to you, at least now I know how they have felt when for the very first time they have heard my cries.
    I don't know when would that day come, but for one thing I am sure, it will be a harmonious blessing.
    Michael, perfect title, and very soothing language.
    I just want to see it on the front page next week.
    All the best!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Black Hole. Such lovely words and nice that you felt something deep with my poem :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Michael! How you move me with your beautiful words! This is such an amazing write. I absolutely adore it. Very well done! :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Hey Miss Ren, so nice to see your name here :) and thank you so much
      Hope you are well :)X

  • 6 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations! Finally the wait is over.
    It's on the front page.

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Black hole, very kind words :)x

  • 6 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations on your well deserved win Michael! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you so much Miss Kitty K :)x

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on your win, Michael!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)x

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Michael - this win continues your amazing purple patch of poetry!
    It is an honour for me (us) to share the front page with you.

    All the best good man,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben, and the same can be reciprocated fella :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page win Michael! This really is lovely!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda..Lovely comments :)x

  • 6 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on you win Michael

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 6 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win!!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you nams x:)