Comments : Balmy by the bay

  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Can we go to the bay with you? :-) So beautiful.

    I felt lighter after reading this. I see another unique rhyme scheme, you did a wonderful job here Mark.

  • 8 months ago

    by Michael

    Mark
    A nice piece of writing, and escaping at times helps with the mind. As long as we don't run from things
    A nice flow, with picturesque scene
    Michael :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    *sigh* how wonderful Mark, I long to be at the bay! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 8 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark - excellent !!!! Love the rhyming , layout and content

  • 8 months ago

    by Em

    Just beautiful Mark

  • 8 months ago

    by BeautifulSoul

    I love the rhyming here, it's masterful.