Comments : Never one for churches

  • 10 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mark - what a beautifully described poem about the death of a loved one...

    It is sad to see people we love pass and even sadder when at the funeral we say our final goodbye to the body of such loved one...

    Wonderful and easy to read.

    Nominated.

  • 10 months ago

    by Ren

    WOW! I am so glad this is nominated. I'm covered in goosebumps. Incredible write!

  • 10 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliant thou Mark. Full of sad heart and soul. :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    my my my ... how fabulous

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, such a wonderful write! I loved the story and your rhyming. Just beautiful. Well done -