Comments : Song of your heart

  • 9 months ago

    by Maher

    "One day, our paths will cross each other,
    and I will drown in the beauty of your eyes."

    That just hit home and made me smile. Thanks :)

  • 9 months ago

    by ddavidd

    This is so enchanting dear Naaz. See you did it again.

  • 9 months ago

    by naaz

    Thanks David and Maher

  • 9 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Naaz, excellent stuff! Love it :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Beautiful

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Naazz, such a lovely write. I love the story with this.

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful enchanting piece about the universal wish for true love. Nice visuals, nice rhyming and a piece that makes the reader feel the emotions portrayed. It made me wish that love to come to the writer. Talking to stars, "Dream catchers catching our dreams in the night of the fireflies" inspires lovely imagery. Milly x

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An enchanting piece wishing for love. Nice visuals, nice rhyming and a piece that makes the reader also wish that love to come to the writer. "Dream catchers catching our dreams in the night of the fireflies" inspires lovely imagery. Milly x

  • 9 months ago

    by naaz

    Thanks you so much dear Milly, Brenda, kitty em