Comments : Vampire Narrative Part 2

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Dark and darkly humorous in places, Robert. I will be on hand to read the next instalments should you decide to post them.

    All the very best

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A captivating light hearted follow on. It raises interest in the reader as to why the newly created vampire resisted the temptation of an easy meal. Leaving it with open questions is an excellent ploy to ensure reader loyalty. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Robert Long

      Thx milly. You and Ben tbh are loyal to me and I appreciate it so much. I try to make it good and I did apparently. Thank you for feedback and take care as well