Comments : Don't die brother

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    This made my heart break

    • 9 months ago

      by Kereen

      I'm sorry to hear.
      It was a piece inspired by war and the loss and grief it causes

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A haunting chilling piece that gave me goosebumps. Very well written heart wrenching portrayal of being closer to a war than most of us ever get to be. I really hope this gets nominated. Unfortunately I've run out of votes. It's a really important piece that brings such experiences the bandwidth that it needs. Best wishes Milly x

    • 9 months ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you so much. And that's ok your thoughts on this was truly appreciated

  • 9 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    First of all Kereen, I like the simple title and the repetition of it through-out the poem. It gave the poem a great feel, as Milly puts it, a chilling feel. I like the rawness of the expression of how much the speaker here loves his/her brother. Plus, this flowed well too. A great write and I am glad I still can nominate! :-)

    • 9 months ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you so much. I'm deeply greatful to you

  • 9 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on the win Kereen!

    • 9 months ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you so much. I'm so happy!!!

  • 9 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 9 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations!

  • 9 months ago

    by C Cattaway

    Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win.
    Catherine x

    • 9 months ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you so much

  • 9 months ago

    by Kireasha L

    This was a well written piece. I loved the way you formulated each line, I've gained more of an insight and respect on the brave men/women who fight for their freedom and country. Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!

    -ki

    • 9 months ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you so much I'm glad you had such an insight

  • 6 months ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    A wonderful poem with a lot of emotion that resonates with everyone out there who has family in the war zone fighting for a country. The poet has very well captured the emotion of trepidation, fear and hope felt by the family members. Very well done.

    • 6 months ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you for your sincere comments