This is a pretty raw piece - very much a slice of modern life. I can't relate to it myself as I'm kinda oldschool, but I can picture quite a few of my friends in this light. I think it's truthful and a good piece.

One thing that stuck out though, unless it was intentional - you spelled 'villain' wrong. Still a great write though. Well done :)

Elizabeth, damn! Glad this is nominated . A very honest raw write that most of us can relate to but usually won't admit to. Well done-
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This is so personal and raw that it is in fact fantastic and unfortunately relatable

Congrats on your win

Congratulations Elizabeth

"I liked to blame others
Because we aren't supposed to be the villain in our own stories"

I don't think I, or anyone for that matter, could've related more to these lines. Raw and real, stellar piece!!