Comments : Villain

  • 9 months ago

    by Maher

    This is a pretty raw piece - very much a slice of modern life. I can't relate to it myself as I'm kinda oldschool, but I can picture quite a few of my friends in this light. I think it's truthful and a good piece.

    One thing that stuck out though, unless it was intentional - you spelled 'villain' wrong. Still a great write though. Well done :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Elizabeth, damn! Glad this is nominated . A very honest raw write that most of us can relate to but usually won't admit to. Well done-
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  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    This is so personal and raw that it is in fact fantastic and unfortunately relatable

  • 9 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 9 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations Elizabeth

  • 8 months ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    "I liked to blame others
    Because we aren't supposed to be the villain in our own stories"

    I don't think I, or anyone for that matter, could've related more to these lines. Raw and real, stellar piece!!