Wow Michael...this is intense and just dripping with fear and uncertainty. The format is perfect as well, creating a profound effect with each line...making the pauses and punctuation seem heavy and menacing in all the right places. Amazing job!
A chilling piece that conjures up images of oppression. Being held prisoner. The observers discomfort, unease and distain vividly portrayed. The presence of a villain with his prey forced to watch him eat. A captivating chilling piece. Best wishes Milly x
This takes me back in time having dinner with my parents as a child. It was a cold silence him just waiting for me to make a wrong move or say something. Excellent write Michael. All the best and hugs to you