Comments : Remake.

  • 8 months ago

    by hiraeth

    this is absolutely beautiful, i hope this was cathartic for you to write. please don't ever stop writing :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Scott Cole

    Congratulations on ur win!!!

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very mature write considering the young age your profile has you at and a poem that is fully deserving of its place on the front page. Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    *I would think that the word 'condensate' would be better replaced with 'condense' there. Up to you.

    • 8 months ago

      by Rosy Cheeks And Irony

      Thank you xx <3 and I think you're right :) Condense would be better, lol still in the process of finishing this one up xx

  • 8 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations RC&I

  • 8 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 8 months ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I'm thoroughly enjoying your work. You have a unique style. This is yet another poem densely packed with meaning and sincerity. Make sure to check the weekly contest results for comments from the judges on your poem :)

    -Jane/silvershoes

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/threads/146593

  • 8 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win! :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congrats rosy

  • 8 months ago

    by Poetess

    well-deserved win! Congrats

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sub judge Comment:

    I have no words to explain let alone describe this piece of
    poetry which has everything to make poetry perfect! I love the
    the choice of words and the smoothness of the read. It carried me
    through the along with the writer and its as if I’m there listening
    as well as witnessing this whole episode. Beautifully penned!!

    Congrats on the Win!