Comments : Remake.

  • 1 week ago

    by hiraeth

    this is absolutely beautiful, i hope this was cathartic for you to write. please don't ever stop writing :)

  • 6 days ago

    by Scott Cole

    Congratulations on ur win!!!

  • 6 days ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very mature write considering the young age your profile has you at and a poem that is fully deserving of its place on the front page. Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    *I would think that the word 'condensate' would be better replaced with 'condense' there. Up to you.

    • 5 days ago

      by Rosy Cheeks And Irony

      Thank you xx <3 and I think you're right :) Condense would be better, lol still in the process of finishing this one up xx

  • 6 days ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations RC&I

  • 5 days ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 5 days ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I'm thoroughly enjoying your work. You have a unique style. This is yet another poem densely packed with meaning and sincerity. Make sure to check the weekly contest results for comments from the judges on your poem :)

    -Jane/silvershoes

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/threads/146593

  • 5 days ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win! :)

  • 5 days ago

    by Sinners gospel

    Congrats rosy

  • 5 days ago

    by Poetess

    well-deserved win! Congrats