I'm thoroughly enjoying your work. You have a unique style. This is yet another poem densely packed with meaning and sincerity. Make sure to check the weekly contest results for comments from the judges on your poem :)
I have no words to explain let alone describe this piece of
poetry which has everything to make poetry perfect! I love the
the choice of words and the smoothness of the read. It carried me
through the along with the writer and its as if I’m there listening
as well as witnessing this whole episode. Beautifully penned!!