Comments : One-sided love

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I genuinely hope this is nominated. Fantastic writing that moved me immensely.

    All the best Sg,


  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    This is so lovely! Every stanza is so beautifully visual. Another swoon worthy write. Well done-

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Shane! Love this! There's so many good bits I could quote the lot! There are very few lucky people that wouldn't be able to relate to this. Brilliant! :-) x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Nema

    Wow. Man, just wow.
    I don't know how you managed to take something that I thought was too cliche to write about and turn it into this mesmerizing, beautiful, beautiful poem!
    Look at the lines and how they flow in each stanza, even in the syllable count, and the way they give a visual image to the reader.
    This is lovely. I absolutely love it and do hope it gets the weekly win!

    Thank you for writing this. I truly enjoyed it. Amazing writing.
    Write on!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Maple Tree

    This took me back to a sad time in my life,
    Oh to be honest I feel my life has always been a bit sad,
    But I feel in these moments it molds us into who we are as a person and as writer's....this is such a powerful piece.. well done

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Hellon

    This is a stunning piece of poetry...each and every stanza paints a picture that is really quite dire to me, the reader. Favourite (although it was extremely difficult to pick).

    I am tired of walking
    on those letters I wrote for you;
    drinking illness of questions in empty nights;
    recycling my thoughts to prevent them from shriveling
    and looking for me in the lyrics of the songs
    in your head right now.

    Simply breathtaking!

  • 1 week ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Be still my heart

  • 1 week ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Woah I’m literally speechless right now.