Comments : Deep in the heart of a fading Smile

  • 6 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Devastating. I am speechless reading this. Overwhelmed with emotions..not sure what to say about it.

    Not only is it touching but also beautifully written. I had shivers reading your closing line.

    Amazing poem

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, I'm speechless...that's all I got. Hugs my dear-

  • 6 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Very sad x

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    From your words.. Be still my heart

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Andrea,

    Your on a poetic role lady, with another fine piece of writing here
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 6 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Dear friend, I don't know what to say. It looks like you have written this for your daughter.
    It's very powerful, just like you.
    Hugs

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    "She balances upon cement curbs
    because it helps her remember childhood,
    however; she continues to see the cliff up ahead

    she knows what awaits her below."
    ^^
    These lines are extremely powerful and hit me so hard, sinking deeply into my heart.

    So much love to you, dear Andrea <3

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, I wish I could take away your pain. I wish I could lasso the sun and capture a beam or two to shine upon you. Sending you love and hugs-