Comments : Deep in the heart of a fading Smile

  • 9 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Devastating. I am speechless reading this. Overwhelmed with emotions..not sure what to say about it.

    Not only is it touching but also beautifully written. I had shivers reading your closing line.

    Amazing poem

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, I'm speechless...that's all I got. Hugs my dear-

  • 9 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Very sad x

  • 9 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    From your words.. Be still my heart

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Andrea,

    Your on a poetic role lady, with another fine piece of writing here
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 9 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Dear friend, I don't know what to say. It looks like you have written this for your daughter.
    It's very powerful, just like you.

  • 9 months ago

    by Ren

    "She balances upon cement curbs
    because it helps her remember childhood,
    however; she continues to see the cliff up ahead

    she knows what awaits her below."
    These lines are extremely powerful and hit me so hard, sinking deeply into my heart.

    So much love to you, dear Andrea <3

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, I wish I could take away your pain. I wish I could lasso the sun and capture a beam or two to shine upon you. Sending you love and hugs-