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by Rania Moallem
Devastating. I am speechless reading this. Overwhelmed with emotions..not sure what to say about it.
Not only is it touching but also beautifully written. I had shivers reading your closing line.
Andrea, I'm speechless...that's all I got. Hugs my dear-
by Paul Hirst
Very sad x
by Em (marmite)
From your words.. Be still my heart
Your on a poetic role lady, with another fine piece of writing here
Dear friend, I don't know what to say. It looks like you have written this for your daughter.
It's very powerful, just like you.
"She balances upon cement curbs
because it helps her remember childhood,
however; she continues to see the cliff up ahead
she knows what awaits her below."
These lines are extremely powerful and hit me so hard, sinking deeply into my heart.
So much love to you, dear Andrea <3
Andrea, I wish I could take away your pain. I wish I could lasso the sun and capture a beam or two to shine upon you. Sending you love and hugs-