Comments : In This Moment

  • 1 year ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I love the simplicity of this beautiful and evocative poem which mixes landscape and emotion so well
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  • 1 year ago

    by Hellon

    Awe...you took me into your special moment and let me share it with you but...what happened afterwards you keep to yourself as you should. Very simple..not sugar coated or " pink ribbony" just, well lovely really...

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This really is quite lovely. It gave us a sneak peek into a budding romance. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    lovely little piece and clever

    M:)

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully intimate and I love how the brevity here captures that moment, yet doesn't give so much to the reader. I like the emphasis of "...stay", that small simple plea. That desire.